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Post by lizjae on Jun 29, 2003 16:38:47 GMT -5
name:: rain hollow
alias:: sea
age:: 17
gender:: female
marital status:: single
race:: human
class:: adventur
pirate or s.e.a. corps:: s.e.a. corps
eyes:: hazel green mystic wonders
hair:: long black sometimes wheres it in a braid
facial :: her lips are very noticable
height:: tall and very atheletic looking boobs are big stomach is little
style:: likes to where pants and a tank shirt like in medievel times
weapons:: she is her own weapon she can handle her self very well but she does where a little knife in one of her right black boot
history:: no family to speak of loves the sea heard of voyage setting out hopped right on board is an adventur loves to travel the world
personality:: good listener but tough chic and hang with the guys
useless:: doesn't show it but is secrectley looking for love
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Post by Audrey Thatch on Jul 3, 2003 10:15:43 GMT -5
okay.. this is good, but I think you may need to be a little more specific in some areas... in any case, you won't relaly have much of a chance to RP here as we're still waiting on a new board.
Also, "Wear" and "Adventurer" may come in handy, as would sentences that are easier to read. See 'personality::' section. You'll find that writing properly will prevent other RP'ers from becoming agitated with you.
Sorry. I'm being rather picky and horrible tonight. ^_^;;
Meg xoxoxox
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